What excites you
When you’re having a rough day
or simply bored out of your mind
or monotony is the caused
write to me and I will
send you some excitement
But first I need to know,
what it is that excites you
Are you excited by thoughts of a
warm ocean breeze,
brushing against you,
tingling the hairs of your body,
while laying on the beach,
sipping an island drink
Perhaps thoughts of
riding a motorcycle fast,
down a clear road,
with a hot chick pressing against you
for safety,
excites you
no, still not excited
how about a candle lit room
a table set for two,
aromas inciting, invigorating your appetite
for the meals to come,
with champagne chilling, and
a sensual, sexy lady
sitting in front of you
anticipating the moment
that her senses will heightened,
her heart welling with desire,
hoping that you will
lend your hands,
lips
and body
to hers...
Does that excite you.
or simply bored out of your mind
or monotony is the caused
write to me and I will
send you some excitement
But first I need to know,
what it is that excites you
Are you excited by thoughts of a
warm ocean breeze,
brushing against you,
tingling the hairs of your body,
while laying on the beach,
sipping an island drink
Perhaps thoughts of
riding a motorcycle fast,
down a clear road,
with a hot chick pressing against you
for safety,
excites you
no, still not excited
how about a candle lit room
a table set for two,
aromas inciting, invigorating your appetite
for the meals to come,
with champagne chilling, and
a sensual, sexy lady
sitting in front of you
anticipating the moment
that her senses will heightened,
her heart welling with desire,
hoping that you will
lend your hands,
lips
and body
to hers...
Does that excite you.
posted by Nali at 11:24 AM
3 Comments:
You know, your poems often makes me think that you are conversing with specific people, thoughts you wouldnt say out loud to them directly but it goes through your mind when you meet them.. You reveal your heart and soul through your poems.. I can see why you are reluctant to share it with others..It is almost like opening yourself up completely. But for the same reason, I think you should continue to share.
You are right. I told you I write when I am inspired. And yes often I don't share my thoughts exactly. I express myself through my writing. Honestly I don't remember who inspired this poem. I think I have to start making notes as to who inpired me to write it. It was written a few years ago.
I have to say, your poems move me more, they always did. You have a way of conveying so much through few words. AS for your prose, or essays, they're equally good. I like the poems even more.
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